P  I  T  C  H ' S

MY PITCH

The opening will start off with a couple in their happiest state together, maybe on there wedding day, then it will move on to the husband abusing and controlling his wife, still loving her but treating her beyond awful. Then we see the phone call happen, between the police and the wife, in front of the husband but hidden in a sneaky way.

MILLIES PITCH

A married couple where the husband is a domestic abuser but times weren't always this way. Starts off with showing happy memories of them, their wedding or a romantic meal showing them at the height of their happiness. Moves on to show them at their current stage where he doesn't love her anymore but needs her, she wants to leave him, all she wants is to be loved and to be happy. She has had enough so makes a bold move to put an end to the suffering.

We have reviewed both our pitchs and this is the result we have come to fusing our ideas together:

OUR PITCH/FINAL PITCH

The opening will start off with a married couple in their happiest state together possibly a wedding scene showing the couple had happy days together. The husband has become a domestic abuser but he still loves her and needs her but acts out because he is scared of loosing her. She wants to leave but emotionally and physically cant. She then reaches her breaking point and cant deal with it anymore and makes a bold move to put an end to the suffering.