MORE STRESS, YAHH 

We took our film to Mr Bunce, to watch so we could get some constructive criticism. As Millie and I came up with the storyline, it all makes sense to us whats going on, but Mr Bunce pointed out to us in fact it doesn't make sense why the male actor beats up his wife in the second half. Just before Mr Bunce pointed this out to us, I had shown our film to my Mum and her friend Alison, both of them pointed out that they were confused why the male actor just beat up his wife with no clear explanation why. They couldn’t see what could of set him off. 

So Millie and I spoke about it, and figured out we clearly needed to add another scene to sort out this problem. Millie on behalf of both of us, sent the actor and actress a message on Facebook asking them if they could come over to my house and when, to film that little bit to add in to sort the problem out.

It was difficult trying to find a time and date everyone could do, because of work, school and other activities we all do, but luckily in the end everyone decided they could do THURSDAY 26TH FEBRUARY. Another problem sorted, Yippee. 

Below I have shown a picture of the message Millie sent on Facebook: